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Late in the night, everybody is sleeping. No sounds out there, just
me and my mind. Today was a very long day; a lot of work and study. I came home
to try a little rest but now my thoughts are higher than ever; so, I remain
with my head laid in the pillow.
“Tick-tack, tick-tack TON TON
TON TON!” It’s midnight. The sound of my mom’s old clock really disturbs me
because it reminds me of old churches. I’m not the kind who enjoys going to churches;
I really fear the old ones. I’m trying very hard to sleep tonight, but this
sound is not helping me at all.
Suddenly one different sound caught my attention; I hear the
chandeliers crashing, coming from the living room. It’s very curious because it
isn’t a windy day and the house is totally closed. I checked it previously, no
slots in the windows, neither in the doors. Why is this happening? I’m not the
kind of person to get scared easily, but this sound let me a bit uncomfortable.
Maybe it was a little animal, or the wind
did this. I thought. I chose to keep silent in my bed, just waiting for
sleepiness to finally come – what’s being very impossible today.
It just passed a few minutes when I feel something cold passing
through my body, like icy breeze in a winter morning. In question of seconds, I
feel my whole body freezing up, the temperature of my room got drastically
different shortly. I cover my feet and I push the blanket until my head,
getting myself all covered up. My parents’ bedroom is nearby, so it would not
be so difficult to call their help, but unexpectedly I get petrified and I
can’t say any words, even my breath is getting colder and heavier. I’m totally
scared and I really don’t know what to do. May I look around my room? Just one
little look outside the safety of my blanket. I take it off very slowly; every
second is like a million years. When I uncovered my face and almost opened my
eyes, I heard something strange.
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Hi.
An acute voice went through my room. A childish and acute voice that
shivered me and made me deplore for this strange dream to finish. Please wake up, please wake up. I
thought by myself, but nothing happened. There aren’t kids in this house, why
did I hear this? I feel my body colder than ice, at this moment I’m losing all
my senses and I’m not able to open my eyes to see where this sound came from.
So, I start to pray like it’s the last thing I could do: Please God, help me and say that it’s only a terrible nightmare,
please! One minute of silence, I’m not hearing anything else and I might
have recovered my senses, but I still can’t open my eyes, I’m so scared to do
this.
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Hi Leo.
Instantly, I’m using all my forces to
try to push an invisible child or avoid it, someone that I don’t know, someone
that appeared mysteriously in my room tonight. I am with my eyes closed yet, I
don’t have courage to open it, but I’m fighting like there’s a dragon in my
room. I’m fighting for my life, I feel so afraid and I want to stay alive. What
should I else do?
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What do you want from
me!!!!!!???
I
said. I’m shaking. Silence in my room, no answers. I take a long breath and I
open my eyes. All I see is my room exactly the way I saw before it happened; no
one but me. Right now, I’m feeling very disoriented, I turn on the lights to be
sure there isn’t anyone in my room. I look behind my door, my closet, every
place that a child could hide. Nothing. But wait, there’s still one place I
didn’t look: I turn my head down, looking straight to my bed. Under the bed is
the perfect place to someone to hide. I’m scared and apprehensive, but I should
do this.
Trying
to keep calm, I get on my knees and take a lot of courage. I take several
breaths, and slowly, I go down to look under my bed. It seems like my heart is
going to stop. But I must be brave. 1, 2, 3… and nothing, all I can see is my
old toys. It’s everything alright.
Slowly,
the temperature of my room starts to get warmer. I feel my breath and my
heartbeats slowing down, too. I feel better, but I’m still afraid. Will it come
and scare me again? Well, I should not think about that now. Maybe it was just
a strange dream. I look at my cellphone, it’s exactly 1am. Has just one hour
passed? It felt like it was eternity! My head is in a complete mess.
I
finally lay in the bed again with a complete safety sensation. I start to think
if I should tell my parents about this case tomorrow, but I think it’s not time
to worry about that. There are no reasons to be scared; my parents are just a
few meters near me. So, I imagine: I want
to dream about angels, after all. Everything seems to be alright, at least
tonight.
Author: Leonardo Cerutti



I got goosebumps! Congrats, Leo! <3
ReplyDeleteThank you teacher! You're amazing <3
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ReplyDeleteThe best tale ever!!!!!
Thank you dear!!! *-* haha
DeleteWooow, Congratulations!!! <3
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